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Film Opening- Marking

Level 2 24–35 marks
There is evidence of a basic level of ability in the creative use of some of the following technical skills:
• Producing material appropriate for the target audience and task;
• using titles appropriately according to institutional conventions;
• using sound with images and editing appropriately for the task set;
• shooting material appropriate to the task set;, including controlled use of the camera, attention to framing, variety of shot distance and close attention to mise-en-scene;
• using editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer and making selective and appropriate use of shot transitions and other effects.




It works better now.
The material is appropriate for a family comedy/drama

Titles are over very quickly

Bit of wobbly cam at the start  but you didn't do a bad job of shooting the child actors which was probably a nightmare.

Appropriate music but the big problem here is the mixing of sound levels especially at the start

Camera control was a bit of an issue (TRIPOD)! It got better and some of your choices were good- I like the slo-mo dismounts!

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