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Evaluation- Marking

1) You seem to have split this post into multiple posts. What you have written is very good
2) Excellent post on representation of middle class white children
3) Very thorough post on institutions
4) Good understanding of BBFC and the primary and secondary audience. No audience profile
5) You've described similar films but not what they did to attract an audience. Fine on addressing audience but didn't really deal with attracting
6) Good on tech
7) The generalised evaluation doesn't address the prelim but does chronicle in some detail the journey that the girls went on while producing their film

Level 3 12–15 marks
• Proficient skill in the use of digital technology or ICT in the evaluation.
• Proficient understanding of issues around audience, institution, technology, representation, forms and conventions in relation to production.
• Proficient ability to refer to the choices made and outcomes.
• Proficient understanding of their development from preliminary to full task.
• Proficient ability to communicate.

The girls' evaluation is basic in its use of ICT but does include images and videos to support their points
Excellent on audience, institution, technology, representation and forms and conventions
Proficient ability to explain choices
Basic understanding of development from prelim
Excellent ability to communicate

Tilly 14   Amy 13

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